this is very nice i like the details and stuff! but please next time dont smooth/straighten all of it

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actually I didnt, I just found I was making longer strokes the more time I spent on it...

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oooo...k then nvm me! its good!

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Love it! Can't wait to see the layout.

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her arms are waaaaay too short...

other than that.. great job

Your sketching is crap! Go die!

Heh, kidding. I think its pretty damn good. The details in the bridge in the background looks really cool, as does the overly-crazy castle. I like the style. The arms on the guy look a bit weird, but thats all i can say that isnt great. Good stuff overall.

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Actually your sketching abilities are pretty good.
In response to the others pointing out the arms being too short, I'll give you a piece of advice a figure drawing prof. told me.
Proportion is not the end all, be all.
In other words, it's not as important as you think. Or may think.
I don't know.
It's up to you whether you change it.
(but if you do just remember that the fingertips end at mid-thigh)
sorry if that was unnecessary. I'm not trying to imply anything.

All and all though, I still think it looks good.
It has a feeling of being haunting or haunted. Or both.

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Awesome, Can't wait to see it done. My only complaint is her shoulders look a bit too straight, angle them down a bit and she'll look more femenine and less like a bodybuilder.

i don't know why but it scares me

haha very nice mate very nice indeed

the bg is nice , reminds me a bit of never more

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